(http://onegigco.com/)
http://www.thecateredaffair.com/bpl/
http://www.brixwineshop.com/
http://terangaboston.com/
JeriRose, Management, CHO.
http://www.dsni.org/)
I’m in the process of putting together an event planning team who shares my views and perspectives, and we plan to work diligently to bring you a great time. I would reword this sentence (the first step in bringing this project to life was putting together an event team who shared my views and perspectives) something like that. Then I’d give information about the two names listed below (what are their rolls, where do they work, what do they do, etc.)
(https://www.boston.gov/municipal-buildings/strand-theatre)
We (are still building our team) want to add your name to list to! To send (share) any insight, inquiries, or be a part of this project please email and resumes, feel free to email UnionAvenue1@gmail.com for more information. I would move this comment to the end – if you’re looking for people to add to the team, reword this so that you can have a comment about joining you here and then the questions, comments or concerns at the end of the proposal.
A bit of history on the project
(or some title to let them know what is coming)
I began work on ‘The Tale of a Lonely Recluse,’ entirely out of personal necessity – I sought (was seeking) a closure project. My time spent in the world seeking the new (,) inevitably let me back home, the city of my beginnings, to Boston, the city of my beginnings,(.) and I felt compelled to tell her story(,) as well as my own.
It began (choose a different
word for began) as a story about an inner-city boy who wants more than
anything to know ‘art’, and become a modern day rock opera (does the boy want
to become a modern day rock opera? Wording is confusing). How, I cannot tell
you, but ‘The Maze’ (this is the first time you’ve mentioned The Maze…what is
it?) and its habitants have become a part of my blood stream, if they ever were
not before. The music: jazz, alternative and blues, spans the ages, and I am
honored to act as a vessel for these new stories, in tune.
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